Comments : Quicksand

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Really like this, so descriptive of how deep in love one can be.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Loved this. Love the repetition you used throughout and how love can be amazing bit can kill you too. Well done -

  • 1 year ago

    by Sherry Caayupan

    What a nice poem! I loved it...too much love might kill you indeed...but it will also kill you with heaps of happiness...good day... ;)