Comments : The Unfolding

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    How,
    Can ten delicate fingers,
    Upon two small frail hands,
    Grasp the weight of this world,

    ^^

    I love this poem and truly love these lines. Great formatting too.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    So much said in a small piece of writing lady Love :)
    Wonderful poem

    Michael x

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Love this! A lot of food for thought in this short write. Well done -

  • 6 years ago

    by Mandy

    Love it! Like a small glimpse inside your thoughts :D