Comments : winding road

  • 1 month ago

    by Mandy Earl

    Very visual, Fredy! I know that bone weariness all too well, my best to you!

    -Mandy

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Fredy - all we can do is keep walking on, good man. Really well written and rhymed.

    Take care and all the best,
    Ben

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is so wonderfully put, Fredy. Flawless rhyming and really good flow. Ah, that road... We can do nothing but walk in it! Great work!

  • 1 month ago

    by Lvi

    the road was littered with corpses of ill advised decisions

    ^^this created strong visuals.

    Amazing write !

    Take care-