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I spied this piece earlier.. I like the changes you made in flames to make it look like a flame well done on a wonderful write
by Free verse
Thanks you so much
And where my heart felt like embers from that tree.
This is a beautiful piece
Thanks Mark once again.
This is a great poem and I really loved the layout...very pleasing to the eye :)
Can I suggest a small thing that I think you have wrong here....The first half of the poem is written in past tense which makes this sentence wrong IMHO...
"Where my childhood has grown up in your lap" I think it should be had?
Very much enjoyed this one from you.