Comments : The ghost of our love

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    I spied this piece earlier.. I like the changes you made in flames to make it look like a flame well done on a wonderful write

  • 9 months ago

    by Mark

    And where my heart felt like embers from that tree.

    This is a beautiful piece

  • 9 months ago

    by Hellon

    This is a great poem and I really loved the layout...very pleasing to the eye :)

    Can I suggest a small thing that I think you have wrong here....The first half of the poem is written in past tense which makes this sentence wrong IMHO...

    "Where my childhood has grown up in your lap" I think it should be had?

    Very much enjoyed this one from you.