So many ways to describe someone's eyes as the ocean, the different affects as to how you feel.
Interesting piece, well done.
11 months ago
by Ben Pickard
'Those ocean eyes' can be dangerous things - many a lover has drowned in their depths.
Anyway, this is great and the repetition lent a melody to this which made me want to strum away rather badly on my acoustic guitar and deafen the children with my singing!