So many ways to describe someone's eyes as the ocean, the different affects as to how you feel.
Interesting piece, well done.
4 months ago
by Ben Pickard
'Those ocean eyes' can be dangerous things - many a lover has drowned in their depths.
Anyway, this is great and the repetition lent a melody to this which made me want to strum away rather badly on my acoustic guitar and deafen the children with my singing!