Comments : Stay (Song)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    SC what can I say...
    Well this is beautiful.. without being weird and creepy - i can see you on a stage, in a small local dive bar, strumming a guitar and singing this..

    I do hope things are okay.. this can be taken as a positive. Things are progressing.. moving forward.. or a negative.. the love is pulling away and your trying to hold on tight and bring it back...

    Excellent song SC. Well done. Favourite for sure..

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you enjoyed it. You're right, it can go both ways. Thinking ahead about living with each other's disagreements - that's what it's about.

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      ah good to know :) I also agree with Benny - it should be in the charts..

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Maher, if only the charts were full of music with lyrics like this...

    Do take care, good man.

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, Ben. That compliment is far above me.

      You take care too, good Sir.

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Maher,

    Such wonderful lyrics, and the ending just brilliant that captures your piece
    Well done

    Michael :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Michael, glad you like it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Maher, always look forward to your writes, this being no exception. I totally agree with Ben, it is too bad there aren't enough songs with amazing lyrics such as these. Well done-

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Brenda, very much appreciated

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Rockin' song, Ma. Beautiful lyrics.

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Mel, glad you like it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Speechless. On point rhyming and have to agree with Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    "it took the stars to scar these dreams"

    Great line! Super write :-)
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks, glad you liked it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney


    "Stay (song)" By Maher 4 points

    Judging comment.

    Too close to the sun or too close to hell? Either way it going to burn.

    I simply loved the flow of this poem. It rhymes really well and ones eyes simply dance over it. As lyrics they are astounding.

    A fantastic write which one day, I'm sure we would all love to hewar set to music.

    Great work (4)

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Craig, very much appreciated. I'll try to upload a track soon :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Scrittore

    Ever get the track uploaded? Beautiful!

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you :) Not yet but hopefully soon depending on my laziness

  • 6 years ago

    by Imperfection

    I like this would be cool to hear it as a song

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks, I forgot about this one actually! Will work on it :)