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SC what can I say...
Well this is beautiful.. without being weird and creepy - i can see you on a stage, in a small local dive bar, strumming a guitar and singing this..
I do hope things are okay.. this can be taken as a positive. Things are progressing.. moving forward.. or a negative.. the love is pulling away and your trying to hold on tight and bring it back...
Excellent song SC. Well done. Favourite for sure..
Thanks USB, glad you enjoyed it. You're right, it can go both ways. Thinking ahead about living with each other's disagreements - that's what it's about.
ah good to know :) I also agree with Benny - it should be in the charts..
by Ben Pickard
Maher, if only the charts were full of music with lyrics like this...
Do take care, good man.
Thank you, Ben. That compliment is far above me.
You take care too, good Sir.
Such wonderful lyrics, and the ending just brilliant that captures your piece
Thanks Michael, glad you like it :)
Maher, always look forward to your writes, this being no exception. I totally agree with Ben, it is too bad there aren't enough songs with amazing lyrics such as these. Well done-
Thanks Brenda, very much appreciated
Rockin' song, Ma. Beautiful lyrics.
Thanks Mel, glad you like it.
Speechless. On point rhyming and have to agree with Ben
Thanks Em :)
by Kitty Cat Lady
"it took the stars to scar these dreams"
Great line! Super write :-)
Thanks, glad you liked it :)
by CJ Maleney
"Stay (song)" By Maher 4 points
Too close to the sun or too close to hell? Either way it going to burn.
I simply loved the flow of this poem. It rhymes really well and ones eyes simply dance over it. As lyrics they are astounding.
A fantastic write which one day, I'm sure we would all love to hewar set to music.
Great work (4)
Thank you Craig, very much appreciated. I'll try to upload a track soon :)
Ever get the track uploaded? Beautiful!
Thank you :) Not yet but hopefully soon depending on my laziness