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  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Sadly Mariann, there are many parts of this that I can really relate to and it made me almost wince to read it and reflect. You've captured that worthless feeling and summed it up really well.

    Typo: "Your" in the 4th stanza should be 'you're'.

    I'm hoping this isn't your reality now. Change is often so hard, but rarely impossible. x


    • 1 year ago

      by MariAnn C.

      I agree that change isn't impossible it's the getting there that's the fun part. Sorry for the typo lol. Everyday is a challenge.