Comments : Distanced.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by ddavidd

    I like how you played with the relation of notions and emotions.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by C J T

      Thank u

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    CJT...a beautifully crafted work. I loved that the opening and ending stanzas are the same. For this piece I think it fitted well.

    Here I may go again, hehe, but you know this is such a lovely poem... I think this stanza here is unnecessary:

    Blood..
    So dark but
    So bold.
    without you
    I'm dead.

    It kind of interfered with the gentle tone, blood being dark.

    But nonetheless a great piece. :-)

    • 2 weeks ago

      by C J T

      Thank u. I kinda wondered about that as I was typing it out. Haha

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A great title, given that the only distance between you is physical ... he's right there with you, in your heart - couldn't be closer. Great write! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 2 weeks ago

      by C J T

      Thank u

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    CJT
    Like the style and the flow of your poem, with a heart-felt message throughout
    Well done.
    Michael :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Well formatted and a touching love poem.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by C J T

      Thank you!!