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I like how you played with the relation of notions and emotions.
CJT...a beautifully crafted work. I loved that the opening and ending stanzas are the same. For this piece I think it fitted well.
Here I may go again, hehe, but you know this is such a lovely poem... I think this stanza here is unnecessary:
So dark but
It kind of interfered with the gentle tone, blood being dark.
But nonetheless a great piece. :-)
Thank u. I kinda wondered about that as I was typing it out. Haha
by Kitty Cat Lady
A great title, given that the only distance between you is physical ... he's right there with you, in your heart - couldn't be closer. Great write! :-) x
Like the style and the flow of your poem, with a heart-felt message throughout
Well formatted and a touching love poem.
by Mike Sprinkle
Beautiful and touching.