"why call for this versus"??
I am not sure either I read this wrong or it is only a typo.
The poem is very good.
It asks so many original questions, things only a deep soul could see and ask. Question such as this:
"What are these birds,...... representation of me?"
I had these moment of epiphany!! that I felt one with the birds and saw that representation in my soul. I even flew with them a few times.
Dustin, a lovely poem and I visualize the birds as they fly freely. I felt the sentiments you want to convey too. As ddavid mentioned, 'why call for this versus?' sort of distracted me, and affected the beauty of the piece. Is there a typo in this phrase?
The piece is a beauty, despite the little thing I have noticed. :-)