Comments : she can't hide forever behind those eyes

  • 2 months ago

    by Paul Hirst

    This reminds me of a much loved Pulp song
    Great write

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    this is fantastic

  • 2 months ago

    by BlueJay

    There are a ton of images in this that really set this piece above others like it. The story is clear and concise. The emotions are well expressed and the style is interesting. Your voice was obvious without being overpowering or distracting too much from what youre trying to say.