Comments : Aftermaths & empty chairs

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    A hard hitting piece...expressed in such a gripping and eloquent way. This is the state of the world, and this void, it seems it will remain there forever. It is the sad reality you and I have to wake up to.

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I hope this makes the front page; it is a thoroughly engaging and moving piece of poetry.

    All the very best to you,

    Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Simply amazing piece :)

    Michael x :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Wow! Such a relevant write about today's world. So well done-

  • 6 months ago

    by Em

    I am speechless and can't say anything else that hadn't been said just wow

  • 6 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Achingly sad, but I always try to remember that the love still ouweighs the hate in this beautiful world :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 5 months ago

    by Purple Raven

    I love the structure of ths poem. It was very easy to read. I fully understand the way you feel, as i feel this way everyday. There is so much hate in this world and all we need is love. I think all we can do is spread the love.