A hard hitting piece...expressed in such a gripping and eloquent way. This is the state of the world, and this void, it seems it will remain there forever. It is the sad reality you and I have to wake up to.
3 months ago
by Ben Pickard
I hope this makes the front page; it is a thoroughly engaging and moving piece of poetry.
Achingly sad, but I always try to remember that the love still ouweighs the hate in this beautiful world :-) x
2 months ago
by Purple Raven
I love the structure of ths poem. It was very easy to read. I fully understand the way you feel, as i feel this way everyday. There is so much hate in this world and all we need is love. I think all we can do is spread the love.