Comments : Desire of Forbidden Fruit

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very sensual and well rhymed first post from you, Smurf.

    Well done and a warm welcome to the site,


    • 1 year ago

      by Blue Smurf

      Thank you Ben. I appreciate it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Blue Smurf,

    I really enjoyed reading this piece, not to overbearing with sensuality, but enough to keep this flowing with your passion. So I will nominate this :)
    Well done

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      Blue Smurf, Michael said it already. Not overbearing sensuality but very passionate. I love the emotions contained in this and glad that this is nominated.

      Great first post and a warm welcome to the site!

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh ... your need for this lady is brilliantly depicted here. Great write! :-)