Comments : Commercialized

  • 5 months ago

    by ddavidd

    the fluency and straightforwardness makes this piece very strong
    I enjoy to see your relationship with the truth always comes first

  • 5 months ago

    by Mark

    :( beautiful write Mel

  • 5 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Indeed Mel ... words of love should always be genuine! Love this :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sad and wistful sort of write, Mel, that didn't cheer my morning at all, I have to say... lol

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 5 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hehe. Sorry for that, Ben. ;-) Thank you.

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Lady Mel, a sad write indeed. So many people throw love around a bit too lightly. I'm sorry you had to be on the receiving end of that. Hugs my friend-

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Mel,

    the hurt we live with, and the consequences of truth can be hard on us. But at least its the truth :)
    A nice piece from you, that flowed really well, albeit with sadness
    Much love
    Michael x:)

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    Oh I love this, Mel! I missed reading your amazing poems! Well done! I'm so glad to see this nominated!