Comments : Other than you

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Naazz, it's not easy to put yourself out there. You give someone your heart and it's rejected and it crushes you. I get that. But if you never try? Life is too short to live in fear of rejection. Hugs-

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Black Hole,

    a lovely romantic piece, with the sound of your heart yearning for another.
    Well done on a great poem
    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is beautiful and whilst I totally understand the sentiment, I have to believe that there's more than just one great love for each of us. Nothing ventured ... :-)

  • 1 year ago

    by naaz

    Thank you so much guys

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    this made me pretty emotional... the flow, the rhyming, the content was purely beautiful. the last stanza hit me the most, just wow

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is beautifully written and with a touching sentiment. Moving on is a difficult process but not impossible, and there is that one person destined for you. I felt the emotion so much.

  • 1 year ago

    by sparrow


  • 8 months ago

    by gumshuda

    haha, yes, the ultimate thing about love, even though you know it's a burning pyre, you jump nonetheless, with fearlessness, hopefully to turn into a phoenix...

    beautifully written. :)