Comments : The American Dream

  • 10 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A scathing piece of satire here Mark. Most things and places aren't all that they seem I guess.
    A great observational piece with lots of important references to American history too. Thought provoking! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 10 months ago

    by Ren

    Holy cow, this is AMAZING! Excellent writing and rhyme!!

    (<3)^Click!

  • 10 months ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, loved it! Full of sarcastic wit and rhymes. Well done -