Comments : I Still Love You Poem

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Abstract, this is beautiful, I can feel the love, subtle and bittersweet, in your words. I just feel that the flow could improve if you work on where to break the lines. It could give your poem a different intensity or weight. A friend poet once told me that reading your poem aloud can help you identify where you need to break the lines and start a new line. But don't doubt about it, I absolutely loved this and I felt your emotions.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Abstract P

    This piece shows your gritty determination with love.
    Well written, and a nice flow
    Michael :)