Comments : confusion (flawed diamond)

  • 8 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Should have ended this with "if"

    But can't hence flawed

  • 8 months ago

    by Scott Cole

    Nice!!!!

  • 8 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very interesting piece. Thank you for sharing. All the best

    • 8 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Dagmar, hope you liked x

  • 8 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Diamond by shape and by nature Craig! As you would say, it's perfectly imperfect but gets the message across! Fab! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 8 months ago

    by Em

    Loved this Craig well played :)

  • 8 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Nice concrete or shape poem, Craig - really well executed with the rhyme thrown in there as well.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 8 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers Ben hope your well dude.

      Craig

  • 8 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is indeed a gem, Craig. With rhymes in there too, amazing!

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    Very cool Craig! Those shaped writes are tough and you did beautifully and the flow is smooth-

    • 8 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Bren, was just a little idea I had x

  • 8 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I loved the concept of the flawed diamond and the many other possibilities that it poses. The shape too is brilliant. Best wishes Milly x

    • 8 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Hey Mills

      The diamond is a symbolic of us.

      None of us perfect, but perfectly imperfect.

      Sorry for the slow reply.

      Hope you are OK! Although I've not logged in for a while things still filter through.

      Craig x

  • 8 months ago

    by BlueJay

    This reminds me of a joke/quote from a new show my friends and I are watching. It is titled "The Good Place" and the quote is coming from a demon, "You humans have too many emotions - you only need two: anger and confusion!"

    Despite the capitals of every line - which honestly is just my taste, this actually felt confusing and interesting and the style worked in your favor, as did all of the precise words you chose.

    • 8 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      No? we need 4!

      Anger, confusion. love and sometimes hatred.

      I understand hatred is not one we should wish to have. Then again It's necessary at times.