Hope you are OK! Although I've not logged in for a while things still filter through.
11 months ago
This reminds me of a joke/quote from a new show my friends and I are watching. It is titled "The Good Place" and the quote is coming from a demon, "You humans have too many emotions - you only need two: anger and confusion!"
Despite the capitals of every line - which honestly is just my taste, this actually felt confusing and interesting and the style worked in your favor, as did all of the precise words you chose.