Failure

by Victor   Feb 21, 2018


Living in hell
Nothing is well
Want to get out
Can only scream and shout
By myself, all alone
I just want to go home
Why should I hail
A god who's failed?

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  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Victor, a raw open write. I feel your pain in every line. Please never feel alone. We are all here if you ever need to talk or vent. Hugs-

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Nicely rhymed , short but speaks volumes. I can hear your screams... When you are living in hell everything seems to be insurmountable. I get the strong feel of abandonment, a loss of faith but it is also filled with such sadness. Sometimes shouting and screaming isn't the key to the door out of hell, sometimes its better to quietly reflect and reach out for help. A thought provoking piece. Sending you a big hug (your never alone on p&Q) best wishes Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is probably. Much deeper and relatable than will be given credit for.. I hear you

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