I was snooping whilst I should be have been sleeping and came across this omg if it's about who/what I think it's about then no no no no no no no no no do not let him or any man/woman get to you like that remember you are worth so much more beautiful lady really you are and I mean that from the bottom of my heart. I wish I could nominate this resonates so much unfortunately
Much love xx

"I wanted to love you
louder than your demons
... ever could ..."
^^
Totally brilliant opening and a fantastic quote in its own right that speaks so much in so few words.
We've all wanted to 'fix' a man ... to love him all better, sadly it rarely works - as with everyone, you can't love someone that doesn't love themself. I love it Ren! :-) x
=^.^=

What a superb opening stanza... "I wanted to love you louder than your demons
…ever could…" There are givers and takers in the World and it seems that sometimes the people who need the most help cast it aside. A great little write. Best wishes Milly x

Ren, Wow what a write! You hooked me right from the start and sent me on this journey that ended too soon-this really is awesome Ren, I'm blown away-Hugs to you girl!

Miss Ren,

this gives me the chills brrr! BBut what a piece lady, so powerful in such a short few lines. So cleverly penned. albeit a thread of sadness.
Much love and warmth
Michael :)x

Ren you have your own unique style of writing. You always portray so much with fewer words. Though after such a start I didn't want it to end...
still loved the end of this poem.

"..Of good and pearly looking things
We tend to love and appreciate
Little know we of their misery
Which track and crack the hero's skull.."

Reminiscing on these my lines, reminds I can relate to this. Not all we admire, fit in. Silence whispers that we may think.
Always intrigued by your great wit!

This is such unique style of poetry. It flows really well, although I felt somehow that you were about to lose the strength of the rhyme at the end. Nonetheless, it still was a lovely read!

Write on!

Absolutely perfect

I love your way of writing

I love this Ren. Such sparing expression of such poignancy.

This is a beautiful peice. Very well worded & flowed together perfectly. I can truly feel this.

Nicely laid out, Ren. I do like your style!
As for the content. Well, some people don't appreciate what they have, do they?

Take care.

Every line is speaking great things. The way you have lined up this write is really appreciable. The last line is giving a fine touch to this art:
…you were just passing through…

I connect so well to this poem.

I feel like so many people we meet are just chapters meant to help us "level up" in life. It may hurt terribly at first and we may not understand the reasoning behind things happening or people vanishing but eventually things happen that give you some kind of clarity.