Comments : I see you in the sun

  • 6 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhh this is beautiful....reminds me of my bird...just beautiful

  • 6 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Very beautiful poem dedicated to someone dear to you. I loved the last stanza.

  • 6 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    aw ... this is so swoony BT :-) I love how you describe HOW your love affects you ...

    "And it always paints me in the golden energy that you always have"
    ^^
    This really highlights that lovely feeling of seeing ourselves through the love of someone else, a wonderful feeling. Beautiful write! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    "Even if sometimes the only beautiful thing I can find about the world
    Is you."
    ^^
    Awwwww!! <3

    Such an incredibly sweet and loving write! Well done!! :)

    • 6 months ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      I was waiting for someone to comment on that line!! Lol. Thank you