Comments : Torn Pages of a Poet [Double Balassi]

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I have never read one of these and it was a pleasure to do so. There's not enough formed poetry tried these days, in my humble opinion. Excellent stuff.

    All the best to you,


  • 9 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Well ... I learn something new every day and now I know what a Balassi is - so thanks for sharing Nee :-)

    The structure aside ... I love your language here and the tale of the troubled poet. Lovely! :-) x

    • 9 months ago

      by Nee

      Thanks Kitty hon :) I really appreciate it <3

  • 9 months ago

    by Hope


  • 9 months ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful piece, and very well written :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Michael


    A great piece of writing, and in a style I haven't come across.
    Well done
    Michael :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh my word.. That is all!

  • 9 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Nee, If you keep on writing like this, I never want the ink of your pen to get dry. Keep on penning