Comments : Cloud of Annalise

  • 9 months ago

    by Michael

    Blown away Mark!

    this is simply a beautiful piece of writing, with a flow of so many images and love being a strong emotion, threading all through this enchanting poem

    "Each crevice and curve
    every dimple and eye lash,
    outlined by an unmerciful creator
    whose taunts on me wreath."

    Wonderful fella, well done
    Michael :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Natasha Sequeira

    Love it!!! Love it!!! Love it!!!

  • 9 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    The concept of seeing a lost love in the shape of a cloud is brilliant Mark, great piece! :-) x

  • 9 months ago

    by Ren

    Goodness gracious, this is a gorgeous write!! Amazing job!