Blown away Mark!

this is simply a beautiful piece of writing, with a flow of so many images and love being a strong emotion, threading all through this enchanting poem

"Each crevice and curve
every dimple and eye lash,
outlined by an unmerciful creator
whose taunts on me wreath."

Wonderful fella, well done
Michael :)

Love it!!! Love it!!! Love it!!!

The concept of seeing a lost love in the shape of a cloud is brilliant Mark, great piece! :-) x
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Goodness gracious, this is a gorgeous write!! Amazing job!

(<3)^click!