Wow! This was powerful and a punch in the gut. Thank you for sharing this personal and open write.

beautiful

Congratulations :) :) :)

Congrats! Great win.

Congrats on your win

Wow this is incredible. Pain described so beautifully. Well deserved win.

Judging comment:

Woah, this piece was quite something - a lot different than what I have mostly read, and very much intense. Dangerous feelings overflow this and I am left in a place from where I do not know which words to pick up. The unkept structure and the free flow of this poem works very well to bring out the feelings and make the reader connect with them and feel them. The feelings brought out from this piece, did, truly, kept getting worse step by step. I no more know what to say.