Comments : Noises of our past

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    but our fingers never interlocked to give birth
    to something beautiful
    and we didn't get a chance to listen to the
    unheard music of our feelings.

    ^^

    A sad piece, but these lines here are wonderful to read.

    Take care and all the best

  • 2 months ago

    by naaz

    Well penned!

    All the best from me too...

  • 2 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is beautiful

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Maple Tree

    Allowing the past to consume something beautiful is a pain I think we have all experienced a time or two. I cant stop reading this poem, it allows me to sink into memories of my own.

    Such a beautifully written poem, the nature tones and sorrow are mixed in a very tasteful way..
    excellent!