Prince, Your poems are so so so beautiful.
Once again, I couldn't stop myself from nominating your poem.
Loved it!

Danny, fascinating write. You pieces flow so smoothly, like water. It seemed bittersweet, half good thoughts, half bad memories. Well done-

Beautifully written. Emotionally vivid. Loved every line and how it flowed. Amazing work!

judges comment
I was torn between this and one other by the prince and two by Ben Pickard for my third vote. In the end I chose this piece because of stanza 2. Sounds daft but after reading all 4 pieces this is the section of poetry that stuck in my mind. Loved it. A clever write, chopped back to only the words that mattered. I did feel that the pace quickened at the end. Maybe the lack of punctuation in the final two stanzas compared to stanzas three and four. (Maybe it was written like this.) Worthy of an HM at least 4 points.