Comments : Petals & Rosebuds

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Huge swoon here Daniel - this is beautiful and sensual. Nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful floral tribute to one loved. I loved the imagery that shouts out all the lovely things of a Summers day. Kitty beat me to the post in nominating. A stunning piece. Milly x

  • 1 month ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Glad to see this nominated

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely poem, Daniel.

  • 1 month ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Oh, yes, I like this:
    the imagery
    the tenderness
    the refrained verse
    the the the
    gosh, it's good!

  • 1 month ago

    by BOB GALLO

    This is incredible. Every word, every sense and feeling, feels like one of my own. I guess we both are Neruda's fan.

  • 1 month ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh this is absolutely beautiful!!

    • 1 month ago

      by Daniel

      Thank you so much for the lovely words guys! :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    well, well fella who said romance was dead! ;0 certainly not here, lovely imagery throughout and an awesome end to a fine piece of work fella :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Everlasting

    Warm feeling— that’s what the last stanza invoked in me.

  • 1 month ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congratulation

  • 1 month ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Congrats on your win!

  • 1 month ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I'm so glad this wonderful write won. Well done.

  • 1 month ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful and well deserved

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    "as you threaded a dandelion
    through your amber curls,"

    The whole piece is brimming with beautiful imagery, but these lines held such... I don't even know but wow! Simple and satisfying!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Such a beautiful scene captured here. Such beautiful words! Congrats on the win!