Wow, this touched me cuz I have been homeless b4, and it sucks. Thanks for your comments btw

im glad you liked it.. i wrote this poem for a contest and i guess it was a little bit to deep to win. so i figured i should show it to the ppl on this website because im very proud of it. Im very glad it touched you.. it makes me feel great when ppl say that

I really do feel for the people that live on the streets. I think you have to live or have grown up in or around the city in order to feel the full impact of this poem. You painted a perfectly, sad, vivid picture. Good job:)

thanx you

you should be proud of it, its a fantastic poem! it is very inspiring and had a great message! It really shows you what its like to be home less. i really enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work!

thanx

i do see your point, although my dad thinks they should try harder for themselves and get up and get a job and i see his point too... but he doesnt have a lovely poem to go along with his argument.. so u win lol great job x

omg your poem was so good it really makes ya think.......keep it up....*hugs*

that was an awesome poem and ive been through the homeless thing and alot of my family has also sooo that touched me awesome work
Dee