very ncie poem!!! very breath taking. i really like th last line alot!

oh, that was sad. i too miss my loved ones and i thought the poem was very touching and inspiring and beautiful. treasure them while they're there. thanks. take care:)

That was incredible...Some times theres little things family members say...That normally you don't think anything of...but when they are gone you think of times you talked to them and what they said and you say damn...he was telling me something. You are an awesome writer....Keep it up

This is sweet!

This is so touching..well done baby keep it up.. god bless xxx

very sweet a good read...

This one looked like you forced some rhyming. You don't have to rhyme. Yes it's fun to rhyme, just look at all my poems. They all rhyme. But you don't have to. If your forcing it then it doesn't sound as natural and as flowing as a poem should. The poem has a good message behind it though. It shows you respect your grandparents marriage and them as people. Good job. kilman = David B.