Comments : The Dance

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    OMG...thats was amazing...hope every woman that thinks a one night stand is worth the world, sees it could be the end of theirs!! Bravo!!

    Sarah

  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    very well writen =) liked it... =) u did a good job... hope u pass by mine sometimes =) ciao

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    very nice poem :)
    -Mortalidaga
    xxtakecarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    For some girl this poem is in no way true lol. I don't really know where i got the insperation to write this poem they have just been writing themself lately. I guess maybe somebody is writing through me lol......Thanks for you comments everyone.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Very good poem =) Keep it up!

    ~Grace

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    ...awesome.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    this is amazing, im really glad that someone is writing about things that other people cannot. your poems inspire me to keep writing myself.. anyway nice job (as usual) and dont ever stop writing because you are a natural.. you totally deserve a 5 for this one

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    lucifer: i don't remember ever calling you sick? I'm confused

  • 19 years ago

    by patricia

    wow...that.. that was great i loved it great work and keep writing