Comments : An unwrapped gift in death..

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    I love it! The end kinda confused me but i'm just not all here! But i really did love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    And enjoy reading it i did! WOW your so good at writing depressing poetry Amy....everytime i read your work it gives me chills - another wonderful piece to add to your list hun well done

  • 19 years ago

    by fear no pain

    dude, thats kinda depressing...a 9 yr old killing herself cause she didnt have a box to cry in...i can fully relate to it, cause i was that 9 yr old..cept im still alive..but to you ignorant people who say, "Why would some kid kill themselves over a box? I don't get it." It's that she was so sad and miserable because of her parents not paying her any attention, she didn't want to cry anymore, she wanted to have a place to keep her tears, a place to put away her sadness...
    Sometimes I worry about those people who can't understand things as deep as this poem
    Oh yeah, and by the way, good work!

  • 19 years ago

    by olivia

    That was a mazing poem i loved it great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    This was awesome tears...so sad :(
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx
    awesome job <3

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    its a sad story , am pleased iits not true .. i do like the way you write . very gifted

  • 19 years ago

    by Desert Rose

    damn man you are really good i cried on this poem wow

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    This was a trully wonderful poem. All of your poems are just amazing, but this one really just, stood out above the other ones. I'm sorry for the people critizizing you over the childs age, and the place you chose for her to lock away her tears. This poem was just...great, don't worry about what other people have said.

    Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by Madison

    Hey! WOW great work! 5/5! It was so nicely writen. Keep up the great work

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully tragic. This poem expressed so much sadness. Very creative...good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    One of the best I've ever read. You done a super job with choosing exactly the right words. Keep up the good work. Sad, but enjoyed. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A tear jerker for sure. You are very talented and gifted. Sad but Enjoyed. Keep up the great work. lol