Comments : Passing

  • 13 years ago

    by Liam

    the last stanza rocked! great work! (im getting better typin "you" by the way!)

  • 13 years ago

    by August

    good job, Liam! we'll see a grammatically sound poem out of you yet!!!!! yeah, thanks for reassuring me about the last stanza, i wasn't 100% behind it.