Wow this poem is so awesome! You're so right about this. Your use of words show what you mean. You're a great writer and it shows!
Keep writing.

~Kelly

Wow this sounds a lot like a poem I'd write :). Awesome job and keep up the good work.

superb poem. its a sad fact of the times in which we live in. i liked the comparisions throughout the poem. its very well written and makes you think. good job. tc. xmollyxx

WOAH!!!! this poem is POWerfuL!!!!..very awesome job!!!!!! intense poem..I couldnt look away from reading it! it was brilliant