Comments : I Need You

  • 13 years ago

    by Deaths Maiden

    Your poems are very heartfelt and compassionate to the one you love so.
    Your soul mate.
    I had one once to but he left me moved on to the afterlife.
    Has he read these? I am sure that he would be very flattered and honoured that you care so much for him.
    Thankyou for your feedback on my poetry it is only fair that I am to comment on your poetry and so I have.
    Your writing is intriguing.
    I encourage you to keep writing for this is the true way to express our feelings and our hearts.

    ~*The true art of writing befalls in the heart and not from the mind, if it does not, then tis not an art of writing*~ (Deaths Maiden)


  • 13 years ago

    by ashley

    hey...thanx for ur comment i really like u poems there awesome and keep writing..

    ashley xoxoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by Marie

    I really like this poem.. I can sort of relate to it... You are an awsome poet don't let anyone tell you different.. I'm looking forward to reading more things, and hope you have more to come!


  • 13 years ago

    by spike

    that is good i like that one

  • 13 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    very nice and passionate poem. it's sweet but not too over-the-top. i think it's balanced and beautifully written. keep it up. take care:)

  • 13 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Tender, romantic, and sensual. Great poem! Bon chance....