Your poems are very heartfelt and compassionate to the one you love so.
Your soul mate.
I had one once to but he left me moved on to the afterlife.
Has he read these? I am sure that he would be very flattered and honoured that you care so much for him.
Thankyou for your feedback on my poetry it is only fair that I am to comment on your poetry and so I have.
Your writing is intriguing.
I encourage you to keep writing for this is the true way to express our feelings and our hearts.
Remember...

~*The true art of writing befalls in the heart and not from the mind, if it does not, then tis not an art of writing*~ (Deaths Maiden)

Thankyou.

hey...thanx for ur comment i really like u poems there awesome and keep writing..

ashley xoxoxo

I really like this poem.. I can sort of relate to it... You are an awsome poet don't let anyone tell you different.. I'm looking forward to reading more things, and hope you have more to come!

Marie

that is good i like that one

very nice and passionate poem. it's sweet but not too over-the-top. i think it's balanced and beautifully written. keep it up. take care:)

Tender, romantic, and sensual. Great poem! Bon chance....