Comments : The Pain

  • 19 years ago

    by DeludedHonesty

    That was a lovely poem, very powerful. I enjoyed it. Keep writing!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Sad that the narrative in this poem was so aggrivated over a boy, they led to cutting... but yes, it does happen. I know a friend who almost killed themself through love. Good poem, no, great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by BabyGurl

    ALL the poems you have told me to read i have loved and i am speachless WOW

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    This poem is okay, it would be so much better if you used proper grammar, keep writing