I love it! It's very touching, and undoubtfully emotional. I can just imagine the guilt and sorrow she must feel after that...

Thanks for commenting on my poem :)

Another amazing piece I've read tonight. I love darker poems, such as this, and you've caputured the moment in words wonderfully.

WoW1 Even if your not used to it- ur awsome at it- keep it up! 5/5

-Luv KT

this is really good! its sad thogh but great job...keep it up!~krisitna

such a very nice poem... sad but its nice... gave it a 5... hope u pass by mine again sometimes... ciao

Another awesome poem, keep it up