Awesome poem....Very well written..Check out my poems when you have time! and tell me what you think!

THe best poem you've ever written in your lifef you catch the emphasis. But yeah I hella love this poem are you ever gonna let him read it? Maybe one day huh?Love yah

Girl this is really good, a sticky situation that can only be mended with love, keep ur head up...LiL One

hey wow that was really good! im sorry for everything tho...hopefully things will get better, try and check some of my stuff out~! thanx a lot-
a lotta love- pocket~