Comments : Fantasy and dreamer

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Enchanting, seemingly faithful to the holiday of christmas...and I'm not sure why. And even so I doubt it was your intention (could it be the X-mas music in the backgrond)?
    Regardless, your words seem somehow immortal to a common's tongue.
    Again, excellent.

  • 12 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Unfinished or not, it's a beautiful, romantic piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    You taught me to rise from ashes and cleanse in rain
    ^ That was a beautiful line.

    You are my constellation in ocean blotched with silver thread
    Taken the form of the loveliest diamonds too precious to be worn
    And oh, how the stones did fall into place to build a picture of pure delight
    Truly a heavenly beauty, worth the words of a thousand skies
    ^That was a gorgeous stanza.

    I really admired this poem. Your word choice was perfect, and the poem flowed amazingly well. Not many people have this talent. Great job...