You might think its weird for you, but I enjoyed the sensations created and your luxurious use of language.... (yes, i did just call your language luxurious *pauses in confusion*) In a drowsy, chocolately way, you know...
Wow. What an amazing idea for a poem. This is really different from your other writings, but does not seem out of place. It's really beautiful. The similies, and metaphors, comparisons... it's all so wonderful.
I was sure I'd read and commented on this poem... for some reason comments I make seem to disappear sometimes :| it's really freaky.
this poem was good enough to eat! It was like the candy shop of love.. wow, I sound weird. But it was awesome- written with beautiful description, sweet words and a vast amount of originality!
I'm sorry... I can't find anything to critisize in this poem. I think it was great, beautifully written and utterly talented.
5/5! Well done on a truly remarkable piece of work.