Comments : Candied ecstacy

  • 12 years ago

    by Fireflower

    that poem wasn't wierd! It was beautiful!!!........ god i'm hungry......

  • 12 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    I like it. I am rarely the one to write outside of the literal but its a nice poem. Keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Second poem of the night that I've considered delectable, but delectable this was. Wonderful imagery and a truly scrumptious poem all around.

  • 12 years ago

    by paperdoll

    Soooo..... candy cane, anyone?

    You might think its weird for you, but I enjoyed the sensations created and your luxurious use of language.... (yes, i did just call your language luxurious *pauses in confusion*) In a drowsy, chocolately way, you know...

    Anyhoo, the point is, well done. Ignore the rest.

    -paperdoll

  • 12 years ago

    by FireCracker

    WOW .. all ur poems are really good ! lol .. it was way cool !! =D
    I loved this one to .. u truly are awesome at writing .... !! also, thanks for ur comment .. !

  • 12 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    Wow. What an amazing idea for a poem. This is really different from your other writings, but does not seem out of place. It's really beautiful. The similies, and metaphors, comparisons... it's all so wonderful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Edina

    wow that is such a beautiful poem keep it up !! take care
    ~lots love

  • 12 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    good job! your a gifted writer... haha thats great that you are opened to criticism but, i have none!
    :o) - K

  • 12 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    I dont really know what to say...i think it's good. But i think u were trying somthing out her.

    It reads too much like an experiment,

  • 12 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    I was sure I'd read and commented on this poem... for some reason comments I make seem to disappear sometimes :| it's really freaky.
    But anyways...
    this poem was good enough to eat! It was like the candy shop of love.. wow, I sound weird. But it was awesome- written with beautiful description, sweet words and a vast amount of originality!
    I'm sorry... I can't find anything to critisize in this poem. I think it was great, beautifully written and utterly talented.
    5/5! Well done on a truly remarkable piece of work.
    :-)