that poem wasn't wierd! It was beautiful!!!........ god i'm hungry......

I like it. I am rarely the one to write outside of the literal but its a nice poem. Keep up the good work.

Second poem of the night that I've considered delectable, but delectable this was. Wonderful imagery and a truly scrumptious poem all around.

Soooo..... candy cane, anyone?

You might think its weird for you, but I enjoyed the sensations created and your luxurious use of language.... (yes, i did just call your language luxurious *pauses in confusion*) In a drowsy, chocolately way, you know...

Anyhoo, the point is, well done. Ignore the rest.

-paperdoll

WOW .. all ur poems are really good ! lol .. it was way cool !! =D
I loved this one to .. u truly are awesome at writing .... !! also, thanks for ur comment .. !

Wow. What an amazing idea for a poem. This is really different from your other writings, but does not seem out of place. It's really beautiful. The similies, and metaphors, comparisons... it's all so wonderful.

wow that is such a beautiful poem keep it up !! take care
~lots love

good job! your a gifted writer... haha thats great that you are opened to criticism but, i have none!
:o) - K

I dont really know what to say...i think it's good. But i think u were trying somthing out her.

It reads too much like an experiment,

I was sure I'd read and commented on this poem... for some reason comments I make seem to disappear sometimes :| it's really freaky.
But anyways...
this poem was good enough to eat! It was like the candy shop of love.. wow, I sound weird. But it was awesome- written with beautiful description, sweet words and a vast amount of originality!
I'm sorry... I can't find anything to critisize in this poem. I think it was great, beautifully written and utterly talented.
5/5! Well done on a truly remarkable piece of work.
:-)