This is a beautiful poem with incredible imagery. So many wonderful words: dark, sad, poignant, and wholely memorable.
12 years ago
This is amazing!! I love it! The words flow so well that it pulls my mind to the true meaning! The temptation of reading this poem pulls me closer to it until I must read it! I can not pull my eyes away from this for my heart would yearn to read it again. . . it's so amazing and so compelling. . . I feel it surging through my veins as if this is a story of me. . .this leaves me speechless! keep it up!!!
^^o ya I can write comments that are sooo deep! lol
i think it's horrible. hey..if your gonna diss my work..im gonna diss yours...because i dont understand it..i would suggest maybe writing something A 13 YEAR OLD CAN UNDERSTAND!!! cause obviously i dont write stuff like that (so you say) but hey..your not 13 right now..oh wow..the big 1-5..thats SO much older then me! i bet you i have had ALOT more life experience than you have..and you can trust me on that one. so dont be telling me that i suck just because i'm younger then you. so maybe i DONT write stuff that you can relate to and understand..well ya know what? see..hmm..how do i say this.....I DONT CARE!!