hey this is great! keep it up! luv alwayz knoxy

Wow, wow, wow... that's definetely a five!!! So beautifully written, with rhyming that is in no way forced.. personally, I loved it. Sorrowfilled yet written well.!!

hey. hey...this poem was so dang good...and you said my poem was good...you are an awesome writter...keep up the freaking great work...I GIVE A 5!...You really know how to put words together...Very cool...Loved it!-Jen

dang!!! girl, this poem made me feel
homeless and cold, alone with no one to love and no one to love me back.
written excellent, with rhyming that
reads and flows perfect.
5/5 all the way

i give it a 5. It's really mournful but so wonderfull written you can't but help feel the pain he feels in the poem.