Comments : Destined Bower (Part I): Darkness' Coming

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Oh how this tale drew me in!
    Your suspense throughout is famous.

    Your sage is revealed splendidly for being wise. And the affection between the two charecters was very elicit.

    Masterful work once again Miles...

  • 12 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    "Flee now for the wood, child, flee for His bower
    For none but He can ignite your soul’s power."

    Excellant poem, truly beautiful. I loved every syllable.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amilo

    I really like this one. The first line was particulary captivating, and drew a sense of mystery that simply tugs you in. I think it's about an apprentice of a holy positition.. something like that. I've been trying to figure it out, but my mind's been pretty clouded today... and all I can say is, excellent job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    excellent... on to part II...

  • 12 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    You're full of this stuff!! Brilliant!!
    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

  • 12 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    I am in complete awe at your writing prowess. Such deep words and such feeling. It is written so eloquently. You are a masterful poet. Wow.

  • 12 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I haven't been reading these but when I saw you had written a part IV i thought i should go back and read the earlier ones, and I'm so glad that I did.
    This isn't your usual style of writing (a storyline) but somehow you make it into a work of art anyway. I don't know if this is an expieriment your doing but so far it's going fantastic.
    The piece kept the reader entrance with wonderful imagery and a perfect introduction that was portrayed with emotional thoughts set in a beautiful way. I can't wait to read the rest

  • 12 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Beautiful.. written with words of ancient age, beautiful narrative and stunning description.
    A flawless poem indeed- a true dark masterpiece.
    I loved every word.
    WELL DONE!
    :-)