Comments : I just wish he knew

  • 13 years ago

    by Kalika

    hey, that was really good... thanks for commenting on some of mine....it sucks when you love someone and they don't even notice you exist, i know how that feels.....keep up the good work!!!! (great i sound like a teacher)
    Kalika

  • 13 years ago

    by Jaime

    that was a cute poem, you wrote it really nicely. guys can be so oblivious (for lack of a better word) sometimes eh? thats fine, most of them really are great, im sure youll find one of them :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Just me

    I love this poem....check out some of mine...laters!

  • 13 years ago

    by .::SHi3L@::.

    nice!!

  • 13 years ago

    by nicole

    hey...very nice poem....it sounds just like wat happened to me...keep up the good work...

    lots of luv

    nicole:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Stevi

    awww this is sooo sweet n i kno where ur cumin from cuz i feel the same way bout this one boi that muh poems are about. well keep up the good work.
    ~Stevi~

  • 13 years ago

    by Jess

    Excellent job Paula! i gave you a 5! keep it up!

    check out my poems & comment if you interested! thanks!

    ..xO Jessie

  • 13 years ago

    by MissKat

    I love this poem. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by sara lynn

    every good poem... i know how that is

  • 13 years ago

    by Jason B

    Great Poem... Keep up the good work

  • 13 years ago

    by pinhead

    ang ganda grabe na itu, alam mo ung nkakarelate! HEHEHE... That was a nice one! I felt it so much.... haay...

  • 13 years ago

    by pinhead

    ang ganda grabe na itu, alam mo ung nkakarelate! HEHEHE... That was a nice one! I felt it so much.... haay...

  • 13 years ago

    by pinhead

    ang ganda grabe na itu, alam mo ung nkakarelate! HEHEHE... That was a nice one! I felt it so much.... haay...

  • 13 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Aw really cute poem. I totally know what your talking about in this piece of work. Keep writing cause you got talent girl!
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 13 years ago

    by shannon

    very good

  • 11 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    It's brought tears to my eyes, because i went throuigh the same thing..!!

    Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast