You know you didn't have to be so rude in your comment! But, thanks anyways for taking the time to read it! You are a good writer, I'll just delete that poem that "didn't make sense". But before I do, I just thought I'd let you know that not all poetry has to rhyme and make sense to the audience, it's the writers feelings portrayed in their pieces! Keep it up though, you're a wonderful writer!
you know it's poems like this that make my day. I know there are tons of guys who write poems like this, but are hard to find. The only ones I can easily find are damn lovey dovey crapy poems. Keep expressing yourself. It's a great release! 5/5
Thanx 4 commentin on mine..That means alot 2me cuz i love 2 write it's the only way i can really express my true feelings...But Your poem is good 2 i cant wait 2 read more of your poems..Your a good writer especially 4 a boy..so keep up the good work