Comments : If Only He Knew

  • 12 years ago

    by JJ

    Awesome, awesome job! well written..I like it. Keep writing
    -J-

  • 12 years ago

    by samytina

    please say it ...just say it sweetie !! i just wish i cud do that but even i am too scared .....but you go ahead before it is too late

  • 12 years ago

    by Chris Engle

    wow, wonderfull poem!! really reminds me of my situation with my best friend.... i havent known her long... a couple years... but if she wasnt engaged to my best friend....... <cough cough> anywho.. shes better off with him..

    anyways i loved it!

    5/5 (and deserved)

    ~chris

  • 12 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    You should tell him the way you feel, if your friendship is true then it will be strong enough to stay true after your feelings are revealed...plus you never know how he really feels unless one of you lays your heart on the line...he just might feel exactly the same :o)
    Good luck!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sexy Cherry

    I like this poem because I too had a crush on my best guy friend but I was too scared too say anything. The poem is very good. Keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by me

    I really know how you feel - exactly! Great poem.

    Take care,
    Karen
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    baby I love you is 4 words...lol great poem tho, 5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 12 years ago

    by Yoshi-o

    i love it im in the same situation, hes afraid to say it and so am i, but much props to you , plz rate mine too!!!!!1

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Wonderful poem! I kinda know how you feel.. I really like this guy too, but he's almost 5 years older than me and it just hurts me a lot to like him like I do. You really worded well! If you have time, please check out some of my poems, it would be really appreciated. Thanks, and amazing job! (",)

    ~Krissy

  • 12 years ago

    by Choti

    you took the words right out of my mouth. except. i did not realize i was in love with him. He showed me a path and i decided to take it. Not knowing it would lead to us going out. however even though i do say "baby, i love you" i still do with to here it from his mouth someday soon. that is all i ever crave anymore to here from his lips.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chyrelle

    Girl i kno tha feelin, man do I. But one things I have learned is do not underestimate guys sumtimez. Last year i fell for a friend and it turned out he felt the same!!!!! I know it has 2 feel good to get your feelins out there though!

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You should tell him! You never know he might just be feeling the same way. You're a very talented poet. I enjoy your work. I look forword to reading more! ~Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by Mira Ukrainetz

    Wow! this was an awesome poem!!its exactly about how i feel with one of my guy friends...:( atleast were really close! great poem 5/5!!
    -Mira

  • 12 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Beautiful poem =] 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sharna

    That's how i felt about someone that i thought was special but then i found that he wasn't. I'm not saying that might happen to you though! Just gather up all your courage and tell him how you feel. And whatever happens .................happens.

  • 10 years ago

    by Bug1219

    I really like this one good job..

  • 9 years ago

    by desiree

    Dang.
    I could SO relate! =]

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    I've been looking EVERYWHERE for a poem like this !
    I absolutely LOVE it - it describes everything i feel as well.
    you're a really talented writer. <3
    keep up the awesome work [: