It is very clear to me that you have a very inciteful mind. Your intelligence is above average and it probably leaves you terribly restless at times. Your poetry is developing very well. Your word usage is very familiar to me. Your style of writing has an energy that draws the reader in. Use this to your advantage and don't be afraid to pick your ryme styles and sequences. You have a nice future in writing, I do hope you stay with it and improve on your talents.