Comments : What Happened To Us...

  • 12 years ago

    by *lonley*star*

    wow if u ever need 2 tlk email me @ this_is_hell_420@hotmail.com cuz the same thing happend 2 me

  • 12 years ago

    by Elissa

    This was really good.... I know exactly how you feel. keep writing your good.
    Love always,
    Elissa

  • 12 years ago

    by dominique

    girl I feel u

  • 12 years ago

    by Forever29

    Great flow! Sadly, most of us can relate to the pain of a broken heart. 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by lee

    that was so sad, and i know how much it really really sucks to feel lk that. i dont really know what to say to make it seem lk its okay though, but ur poem was good, and i understand how u feel...so im rating it a 5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Fierce

    Abosolutely amazing...I cant totally relate to it... But you can get through it all.
    Keep up the poems, I love all your work
    Keep the Faith
    Love Sarah

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Great poem! That was really great! I'm really sorry that you're having a rough time right now. Right now I don't exactly know how it feels to feel that way, but I've been going through a semi-hard time, even though to many it wouldn't be considered much. Anyway, great poem and stay strong!

    ~Krissy

  • 12 years ago

    by clairlouis

    what a great poem, as time passes you will become stronger i once had a broken heart it drove me crazy. You can control how you think and feel with practice and not let it get to you, take care for now and keep writing poems it helps to deal with your feelings and gets them out in the open. claire

  • 12 years ago

    by Hether

    That was awsome! but sad I think thats the only reason God put Guys that are A** holes on the earth was to make girls cry!!! 5/5 Heather08

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey! this is amazing...i can sort of relate...i know wut ur goin thru...keep ur head up...but everything happenz for a reason...well thatz how i see it...take care..and definetely keep on writing!!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 12 years ago

    by broken angel

    I think everyone can relate to this somehow, so definitely 5/5. It's really important to reach people with your poetry and you did a good job with that.
    Luv always, KT

  • 12 years ago

    by xCezx

    hia i so no ow u feel im goin thru da same fing it hurts so much. if u eva wanna tlk im ere: tiger_666999@hotmail.com

  • 12 years ago

    by amanda

    hey hunn!! I love this poem, this is exactly how I feel about my ex who happened to just start dating a new girl right after we broke up, and I went out with him for two and a half years. There are days when I def wish I never told him I loved him, because my life is so hard without him... but your poem is really really frign good

  • 12 years ago

    by Trevor

    know how that feels. good job though
    trevor--

  • 12 years ago

    by Tamara

    i love this poem it reminds me of my relationship.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    wow...thats exactly how i felt when steve broke up with me two years ago...actually exactly two years ago today...we got back together on monday...but this was an awesome poem...if u can read and comment on some of my poems thanks ~Kori~

  • 12 years ago

    by SEXY MEXI

    your last line should me

    the pain i feel each AND EVERY day

  • 12 years ago

    by cici89

    its good . it remindes me of my recent breakup. 5/5 i wrote one to him to if you wanna check it out.

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*Curious Me*~

    This is very sweet.I love it keep up the good work.5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by AlexPotter

    I'm so sorry that this happened. to you.
    I'll pray for you to move on, i know it's hard i'm going through the same thing at the moment and no it's no really fun, but i'm trying to move one, and i hope you are 2