that was so sad, and i know how much it really really sucks to feel lk that. i dont really know what to say to make it seem lk its okay though, but ur poem was good, and i understand how u feel...so im rating it a 5.
Great poem! That was really great! I'm really sorry that you're having a rough time right now. Right now I don't exactly know how it feels to feel that way, but I've been going through a semi-hard time, even though to many it wouldn't be considered much. Anyway, great poem and stay strong!
what a great poem, as time passes you will become stronger i once had a broken heart it drove me crazy. You can control how you think and feel with practice and not let it get to you, take care for now and keep writing poems it helps to deal with your feelings and gets them out in the open. claire
Hey! this is amazing...i can sort of relate...i know wut ur goin thru...keep ur head up...but everything happenz for a reason...well thatz how i see it...take care..and definetely keep on writing!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy
hey hunn!! I love this poem, this is exactly how I feel about my ex who happened to just start dating a new girl right after we broke up, and I went out with him for two and a half years. There are days when I def wish I never told him I loved him, because my life is so hard without him... but your poem is really really frign good
wow...thats exactly how i felt when steve broke up with me two years ago...actually exactly two years ago today...we got back together on monday...but this was an awesome poem...if u can read and comment on some of my poems thanks ~Kori~
I'm so sorry that this happened. to you.
I'll pray for you to move on, i know it's hard i'm going through the same thing at the moment and no it's no really fun, but i'm trying to move one, and i hope you are 2