this one is sweet i like it alot n u made it so real like any gurl would feel this it was great

This was absolutely beautiful. Great job.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

once again you have captured my heart with your writing you are so inspirational and your poems are never a let down!

~jessi~

ohh Lindsay dear,that was amazing :'(
am so happy ,there is someone that really cares to write about this,a person who pays back "just a little" to what Jesus have done for all of us,on that amazing forever Cross.

nothing will pay back his love,no matter
what we did,do,or will do.

God Bless you mate,God bless you alot.

much Love and Respect,
Rua Francis.

5 for you :-)

Marvelously written. However one line caught my eye. No matter how the story goes, or the numerous voices and opinions who stand by with both a vicious and traditional conviction..."For me, a lowly sinner" this line seems unfair for His sacrifice. For it is obvious to me, that we are thought of as more than we think of ourselves, by Him.
*Smiles* didn’t mean to sound preachy.
Bravo~

that was awesome, i loved it!!5/5

I liked the picture you painted with those words.it was reall good