An overall very good poem. It had a good flow to it and didn't veer off subject. I liked the idea of the semi-repeated lines in between stanzas although i thought that they could have been better spaced apart (e.g. after every 2 stanzas) but still a very good poem. I think you should be happy with that, it turned out well.

-ellie

Very well expressed with so much feeling. The only thing I would change is this line " So hurt so much of the time" maybe hurting so much of the time. The only reason I say that is I think so twice in such a short line is to much. Just my opinion. I think the poem flowed well and you did a great job! Take Care! Brooke~

Sorry I re-read that and I read it wrong the first time ignore that. What a moron I am sorry! Great work!