The Wisest Woman I know

by Ashlee Nicole   May 4, 2005


Many times my foe,
Even more times My friend.
Through out all my life,
Until the very end.

You never thought I listened,
You never thought I cared.
Even though I closed my door,
You still remained there.

Through all of High School,
Through all the tears.
I turned out okay,
After all these years.

The fights, the screaming,
And slamming of the door.
Like every other mom,
You came right back for more,

You told me you loved me,
And that you always will.
You showed me you cared,
Till this day still.

A lot of hard work,
It took to be my mother.
You did it just right,
Like no other.

When I'm older,
With one of my own.
I'll come to you,
The wisest person I know.

I love you mom,
Every seconed I breath,
The memories of you,
Far more then skin deep.

I love You Mom
Love Your AsH!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very well written 5/5 very good one

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    You might want to fix this:

    "I love you mom,
    Every seconed I breath,
    The memories of you,
    Far more then skin deep"

    But other than that , this poem is flowless , loved it !5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Really good, rhyming was sometimes off but hey none of us are perfect right. and with some corrections i admit it could be better but when you are writing something for someone else i think that gives it a different purpose like the fact that you care so much to write a poem just for them washes over every mistake that could be changed it dosnt need to be this was really good and it was so sweet im sure your mom took this heart if you gave it her i woulda framed it lol 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Aww this was so sweeet. mother are the best peopl in the world most of the timw with out mine i have no idea where i would be. you love your mom and thta shows in this poem i hope you let her read it . 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenipher

    woo hoo go me lol i thought it was funny too lol

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