Comments : The time it takes

  • 12 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Wow, i'm just always blown away by your words. Very beautiful and thought provoking.
    -A

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Smashing…
    "The time it takes to round this cycle shall lose itself within a storyline"
    An incredible beginning-the wording is like a slide unto the rest.
    "Though deepest wounds shall crust and bleed at an exceeding rate that shall not cease, lesser bruises shall fade with ongoing days"
    You sing a vivid fortitude...
    "Desire to break and sleep through shattered words tempts the drowning heart into a hopeless drift of rounding sobs"
    This poem is restless! The imagery and emotion makes your words glow.
    Bravo~

  • 12 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    Hey thanx fro the comment, means a lot...i am not good a tcomments nemore so i am gonna read thru all ur stuff and vote < will do it slowly > and stuff. neways loved this one its a 5..

    Though deepest wounds shall crust and bleed at an exceeding rate that shall not cease, lesser bruises shall fade with ongoing days

    the above line was b'ful i mean it...positively scintilating

    bye bye

  • 12 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    As always, when I read a poem one line always seems to gather my main focus. In this case it is:

    "Blades scorn the everglades of healing stones, but do not doubt the continued route"

    It brings to mind a vision of the wisest determination. Thoughtful and wary of the trouble ahead required to finish the journey complete, whole.

    Of course, this may not be the intention of this line, but I can read a poem over and over and get a different story every time.

    Nice work, well written with care and patience.

    B